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Post by railgun on Feb 8, 2012 1:11:57 GMT -5
So yea this is what I got as a concept, not sure if anyone agrees with it. These names/plots/art are not confirm, so feel free to nick at them as much as you can. Attachments:
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Post by railgun on Feb 8, 2012 2:00:25 GMT -5
1.3 beta, we have the basic names, changeable any time, plot still being question, leaving the art design to the artist but references are for basic concept IRC wanted. Attachments:
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Post by Tom on Feb 8, 2012 2:30:34 GMT -5
What's the IRC address, by the way?
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Post by tash on Feb 8, 2012 2:35:03 GMT -5
What's the IRC address, by the way? Memviv |
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Post by onestep on Feb 8, 2012 9:11:29 GMT -5
This is sorta for Cop girl, bro and MC and my ideas on how they interact
Basic plot summary is Naomi (Police Girl) trying to pick the lock on a house while MC and Bro watch.
Naomi kneels down, sliding the two pins into the lock with practiced ease. It's honestly pretty impressive to watch, like something out of a TV show.
Though I suppose our entire lives are like something out of a TV show now.
Bro:...
Bro's getting impatient. Or nervous. Or both. Won't be long now before he says something-
Bro: Wanna play a game of I-spy?
- incredibly stupid.
MC: Sure. I spy with my little eye... Something beginning with Z.
There's a brief moment of silence as he absorbs that information and then another moment of panic, before he settles on glaring at me.
Bro: Not funny, man.
I thought it was pretty funny, actually.
MC: We don't really have the luxury of playing I-Spy right now.
Bro: C'mon, man. This is getting really bor-
Naomi: Would you two shut up? I'm trying to pick a stupidly old, rusty lock with a fucking pin. Your blabbering isn't helping.
I can't imagine shouting at us is helping either. But saying that will just piss her off.
We settle down for the wait. It doesn't take too much longer before the lock swings open, and Naomi stands up with a triumphant grin.
Naomi: Easy as pie.
Says the person bitching about it less than five minutes ago. I don't say that either. Woman has a gun.
We move in quickly, scanning the dark interior of the storage shed with wary eyes. But it's empty. Well, almost.
Bro: Mother of God...
Bro looks like he's about to cry. I almost feel like joining him.
I never though I'd be so happy to see so many boxes of bloody Weetabix
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Post by railgun on Feb 8, 2012 10:44:25 GMT -5
This is sorta for Cop girl, bro and MC and my ideas on how they interact Basic plot summary is Naomi (Police Girl) trying to pick the lock on a house while MC and Bro watch. Naomi kneels down, sliding the two pins into the lock with practiced ease. It's honestly pretty impressive to watch, like something out of a TV show. Though I suppose our entire lives are like something out of a TV show now. Bro:... Bro's getting impatient. Or nervous. Or both. Won't be long now before he says something- Bro: Wanna play a game of I-spy? - incredibly stupid. MC: Sure. I spy with my little eye... Something beginning with Z. There's a brief moment of silence as he absorbs that information and then another moment of panic, before he settles on glaring at me. Bro: Not funny, man. I thought it was pretty funny, actually. MC: We don't really have the luxury of playing I-Spy right now. Bro: C'mon, man. This is getting really bor- Naomi: Would you two shut up? I'm trying to pick a stupidly old, rusty lock with a fucking pin. Your blabbering isn't helping. I can't imagine shouting at us is helping either. But saying that will just piss her off. We settle down for the wait. It doesn't take too much longer before the lock swings open, and Naomi stands up with a triumphant grin. Naomi: Easy as pie. Says the person bitching about it less than five minutes ago. I don't say that either. Woman has a gun. We move in quickly, scanning the dark interior of the storage shed with wary eyes. But it's empty. Well, almost. Bro: Mother of God... Bro looks like he's about to cry. I almost feel like joining him. I never though I'd be so happy to see so many boxes of bloody Weetabix I can see this happening, like how cop-girl will make MC help her, and your choices are to help her, or stay behind, and of course bro is there because he's a bro. This could be a nice skit for the demo, we should try working it in some where. |
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Post by railgun on Feb 8, 2012 11:40:25 GMT -5
Alright this is 1.4, where I tried getting a tanned milf, an eyepatch neet, innocent nun, tsundere cop/soldier, and our kinda plain sporty girlfriend. I can see sayaka going yandere. So yea I hope everyone agrees on the names by IRC, if any quarrels just shout it out and we'll have a shitstorm thread, not that it's a bad thing, but we do want feedback. Again, backbone, general concept, nothing is permanent, but I'm sure we're sticking with just 5 girls for now. Attachments:
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Post by railgun on Feb 8, 2012 22:30:48 GMT -5
1.5 beta. I'm pretty sure we're confirm of keeping that milf. I mean come on that's fucking hot. Sara, Elly, and Naomi are just the stereotypes, and Jun I think we still want the eyepatch with a hoodie, but hair and look are still in discussion. Throw out ideas why you can guys. Attachments:
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Post by railgun on Feb 9, 2012 11:35:03 GMT -5
tweak with Sara's design and Maria being Maya. I think MILF is good enough, sara needs to be sweet, but able to turn yan. I cut the drills off Naomi, hopefully this fits what we think of her, but most likely we'll go brunnete and more tsun look. Attachments:
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Post by railgun on Feb 9, 2012 12:18:17 GMT -5
new shitty update. comes with general what we want, but can change any time. the milf is done, you can't make her any better, help where it counts, like elly or sara. Attachments:
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Post by railgun on Feb 12, 2012 11:03:06 GMT -5
Here's the update. Hope you like where we're going with this. Again throw out ideas, draw your own designs, improve, complain, it's all progress. Attachments:
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Post by hex on Feb 16, 2012 10:27:36 GMT -5
Jun's father: - Weapons of choice: Standard-issue USMC Comabt Knife, Shotgun with Flechette rounds, Napalm bombs (homemmade, no less), various semi-automatic guns, a machete.
- Wears his black hair in a short ponytail.
- Has a very quiet, yet strict demeanor and will speak in a soft, polite manner even to an enemy.
- Has several burn marks on his hands where enemy soldiers extinguished cigarettes as part of their interrogation process.
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Post by wootnik on Feb 16, 2012 10:30:41 GMT -5
Jun's father's name: Bruce Yi
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Post by railgun on Feb 16, 2012 11:48:31 GMT -5
Jun's father's name: Bruce Yi you're stepping on a dangerous area there boy. I like it. |
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Post by grayplanner on Feb 16, 2012 12:33:03 GMT -5
Jokes aside, the original concept name for Juns dad was Lee. Are. we still good with that?
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